I
A lull has descended upon,
These paintings sitting forlorn,
They speak to me no longer,
Of things asleep yonder,
Failing my Memory,
Within silent reveries.
II
I find myself alone,
On a night where, mist
Rises like a demon,
hoping for a song.
III
It is a foggy morning,
like the one yesterday
and the one day before.
The land is covered in water spots:
it's raining.
Grass, like trees,
has begun to brown
awaiting autumns attempt
to renew them.
The local trains
move slow and cautious,
some in deep slumber.
Some, as human containers
parked away like spice boxes,
on a busy kitchen shelf.
IV
On sleepless, still nights,
I read about rivers and women,
Stories of men,
That hardly exist,
In these saintly brawls.
V
I hear sleep,
in a room faraway,
Where a mystic watches over,
Swaying to the silent breathing,
Almost falling,
Always still.
VI
Sounds of love, from the death of days
Deep, buried, slow.
Sounds of love,
In unnoticed corners,
craving lovers, craving ghosts,
Absent almost.
VII
There are statues,
and there are statues,
Some stand with indignation,
Uninspiring and pedantic,
Some with vulnerability,
Exuding sexual ambiguity;
These two philistines,
made themselves see,
Without being seen,
now free, so free,
so alone
and so dead.
VIII
Drunk on youth,
Because there are things,
Unmentioned yet,
Not at least to those
Who need to hear them.
IX
'Let us braid hope, and paradox'
'let's not'
'Will make for a strong whip'
'...or perhaps a noose?'
X
This is not,
one of those almost winter evenings,
Where crows are a plenty,
The sky drains,
It's hazy sorrow upon the eyes.
The moon will be overhead,
rambling of evenings past,
an embrace trapped in the wind,
somewhere.
My train arrives soon,
On the other side,
And this epistolary,
seems to scare none.
18 comments:
To all your lines, I have but one question, where does the circle end?
But to one in particular, I recall lines by Yeats.
On sleepless, still nights,
I read about rivers and women,
Stories of men,
That hardly exist,
In these saintly brawls.
If I make the lashes dark
And the eyes more bright
And the lips more scarlet,
Or ask if all be right
From mirror after mirror,
No vanity's displayed:
I'm looking for the face I had
Before the world was made.
What if I look upon a man
As though on my beloved,
And my blood be cold the while
And my heart unmoved?
Why should he think me cruel
Or that he is betrayed?
I'd have him love the thing that was
Before the world was made.
Happy New Year.
I guess,the ideas displayed are heavily ricocheting,and apart from the ones extremely abstract and gravely personal,it has spoken of the same,same staleness of life like many of his other works...
@Dipanjan
are you replying to me?
Then I'd say its his wonderful creativity that he can thread pearls out of the so called stale life.
Its a shame how you freakshows think only boys can be bored of life. Seriously, dudes, go read a book.
@ blasphemous--no,that was only my take on that,by the way,I agree with you...
@M-how come do you have that sadly absurd thought about me??
seriously,dude,read twice before commenting...
Funny, it took you two comments to conjure up the courage. There are pronouns other than he, his, him, is all I meant.
Oh, and this is my blog. Wanker.
actually in the first one,I replied only to blasphemous.So I thought why make two comments??thus,deleted the previous one.
I think I know there are pronouns apart from he,his and him.the thing is,I guess,you are a male by gender,so ''his works'' I said.and NOT LINKED WITH THE PERSON REFERRED IN THE POEM ANYWAY.please read it once more,I have only spoken about ''your'' works,and not one poem in particular.
Well, Im sorry if I wasnt born with a penis. That just makes your half literate argument cimpletely redundant now, doesnt it? Assfuck.
or should a poet be necessarily arrogant and make a show of his finished pairs of expletives not admitting a goddamn boo.You must be a nipper or a your mother's cuntdigger(oup,that rhymes,sweetheart,I must a poet or something,don't ya think so??)Every dog is king at its porch,what is the fucking big deal??
Seriously,i liked your words.But talking with you is one of the biggest mistakes of my life.Pathetic!(you are not neruda or even next to him,but a trash blogger just like me)
* like your works
*must BE a poet
Aww, I hurt your tiny ego.
But anyway, Im curious as to where you picked up the first few insults from, that too in clear grammar. Impressive, for you I mean. Youre probably the first person Ive heard call himself a poet, Im not doing that (yes, in reference to Neruda. No one can be Neruda, asshole, not even you, or your mommy who writes poetry in a journal-and your probably thought you should give it a hand). Im just writing something, people call it free verse, I call them ideas.
Trash blogger, nice to know how see yourself. Now go fuck yourself.
God. Poets fighting. That's a first.
Who's fighting? Im just trying to make worms move their butts faster away from here.
Worms, and their butts. That's a first, too.
sort of beautiful
don't listen to them
this is actully good
I'm no judge
but that's what I felt
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